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Upper Paleolithic grammarians did not ponder punctuation to spread angst and frustration among the populace. It just seems that way. They knew that punctuation allows language to make sense. No punctuation, no sense. Or worse, a different sense.
Take Ernest, a guy with an unhealthy obsession for a woman named Gloria. He burns to tell Gloria exactly how he feels, so he knocks out a stream-of-consciousness letter, no time for punctuation:
dear gloria i want a woman who knows what love is all about you are generous and kind people not like you admit to being cold and heartless you have ruined me for other women i yearn for you i have no feelings at all if we are apart i can be forever happy will you let me be yours ernest
To make a little more sense of this, Ernest capitalizes and sets off the salutation and closing:
Dear Gloria,
I want a woman who knows what love is all about you are generous and kind people not like you admit to being cold and heartless you have ruined me for other women I yearn for you I have no feelings at all if we are apart I can be forever happy will you let me be yours
Ernest
That helps. Now he adds periods, a colon, and a question mark to create sentences:
Dear Gloria,
I want a woman who knows what love is all about. You are generous and kind. People not like you admit to being cold and heartless. You have ruined me for other women. I yearn for you. I have no feelings at all if we are apart. I can be forever happy: Will you let me be yours?
Ernest
Ernest likes the words, but he does not like the sentiment, not what he meant to say, not the pouring out of what is truly in his heart. So he removes the punctuation and tries again:
Dear Gloria,
I want a woman who knows what love is. All about you are generous and kind people. Not like you. Admit to being cold and heartless. You have ruined me; for other women I yearn; for you, I have no feelings at all. If we are apart, I can be forever happy. Will you let me be?
Yours,
Finally, he's got it right, the burning in his heart scorching the paper. Already jaunty, feeling like a new man, he signs with a flourish, “Ernie.” Much better.
Same words. Different punctuation. Different message. Adios, Gloria.
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