Our best writing tip? Edit for clarity and brevity with WordRake. It’s an automated in-line editor that checks for needless words, cumbersome phrases, clichés, and more.
First, ask for an extension, the more pages the better.
In a speech titled “How You Too Can Lose Your Appeal,” Judge Alex Kozinski of the Ninth Circuit, once told law students at Brigham Young University:
“Even if you don’t get the extra pages, you will let the judges know you don’t have an argument . . . .”
Second, write something snide, hyperbolic, condescending, or obsequious. Or all four.
The lawyer who wrote the following sentence lost the case and a bunch of money when the court sanctioned him:
“[This case] is the stuff of which Turow best sellers and other works of ‘legal fiction’ are made, and by which no jurist, either de jure or de facto, would wish to be remembered, but as to which the current chapter is about to be written by the august members of this select Panel – albeit in a strangely oxymoronic, yet altogether predictable, ‘unpublished’ fashion the very nature of which . . . .”Castillo v. Koppes-Conway, 148 P. 3d 289 (2006).
You get the point.
Do you know how I know these two things? A roomful of laughing Ninth Circuit judges told me.
WordRake is editing software designed by writing expert and New York Times bestselling author Gary Kinder. Like an editor or helpful colleague, WordRake ripples through your document checking for needless words and cumbersome phrases. Its complex algorithms find and improve weak lead-ins, confusing language, and high-level grammar and usage slips.
WordRake runs in Microsoft Word and Outlook, and its suggestions appear in the familiar track-changes style. If you’ve used track changes, you already know how to use WordRake. There’s nothing to learn and nothing to interpret. Editing for clarity and brevity has never been easier.
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