WordRake is Bright and Lively
BRIGHT AND LIVELY
Although The Tao of Pooh has introduced many Westerners to Eastern thought, Benjamin Hoff could have eliminated or rearranged some of his words for better flow:
Long after Roo had been carried away by the current, Eeyore halfheartedly hung his tail over the water so that Roo could grab hold of it and pull himself out.
WordRake streamlines the sentence by deleting unnecessary words and changing the passive voice to active.
Long after the current had carried away Roo, Eeyore halfheartedly hung his tail over the water so Roo could grab hold and pull himself out.
